Fire Desire

Details: Written by: TomThumb; Category: Poetry; Created: March 29, 2010, 4:24 am; Hits: 1403

Embers warm - no flame
Wood is wet - much smoke
I would get close but I'm cloaked
In grey unflamed smoke

Rosaline George posted a comment in Fighter

I really like your line, "I'll be the thing that d...

Joshua Hennen posted a comment in Introvert

Very good, succinct and cleanly cut.

wickedwahine_69 posted a comment in Sundown Plows (completed)

I like your edit ;) and your stamina... lol I just...

Joshua Hennen posted a comment in Open Horizon

Excellent work... through and through.

a posted a comment in What Might Be Missing

Bravo! Well done Stephanie!