Unpoem #16

Details: Written by: TomThumb; Category: Poetry; Created: March 29, 2010, 4:19 am; Hits: 1679

A long walk and a rest
Yet another rest
For still fingers
And jacket pillows
For restless rest

Mil57man posted a comment in Clouds on My Tongue

Nicely done. Heart felt on the one. Many times I'v...

Alberto posted a comment in i killed the monster

In the fourth stanza I see a transition to first p...

a posted a comment in The Paradox of the Heap

I really enjoyed this poem. It touches a subject ...

soi-disant posted a comment in The Club Scene

i like that phrase 'premeditated sin'. I like the ...

Amber1020 posted a comment in Highway Diamonds

I'm glad you were about to find it again. :) I'd ...