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Believe

Does fate keep time or steal magic from this place?
Is it the little girls mind or the womans mistake?
Stories lay carpets in houses which weren't meant to fly.
Tell me it's the art which makes you cry?

Words in a crush can illuminate a world.
Life is a rush and comfort a pearl.
Let's argue again, I need to feel me.
Lover, you're a friend until I am free.

Tow this line; I think I've found another island inside.
Everything will be fine, just don't look where I hide.
I meant it all with a different look.
Please don't fall; you've signed the book.

Meet me in paradise until it's dinner time.
Speak sweet advice into a cemented mind.
I don't want to leave, but it's always where I go.
I'll try and dream for belief, but this is all I know.

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'Stories lay carpets in houses which weren't meant to fly'
Good line
The piece would be a good lyric for blues or rock song

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Intriguing - wonder what exactly inspired this? -Soulja4Alethia

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Thank you for the comments. I think that for me, anyway, that inspiration is a culmination of stimuli. So when writing in metaphorical terms, much of this is a culmination of the influences and observations that have come from my own life...

Thank you for the comments. I think that for me, anyway, that inspiration is a culmination of stimuli. So when writing in metaphorical terms, much of this is a culmination of the influences and observations that have come from my own life experiences,not a reflection of any one experience, but a collective reflection on many.

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