Sat September 4, 2010

Ode to Stagnation

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Joshua Hennen's picture
Nice visuals. I wonder what your imagery would be like if wrapped around a plot, such as in a short story....
Alberto Arza's picture
I agree with Joshua, the visual aspect of the piece is well done. I was particularly taken with the second paragraph as I sensed the swirling of the smoke making it's way to the house within the structure of the sentences.
 

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