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			<title>Mr. Jackson</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Prose/mr-jackson-prose-by-damien-m-placido.html#comment-4934</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;Amazing work! Great ending... it is really difficult to give unexpected twists in such a limited amount of time, but you did it flawlessly. The dialogue was believable too. The only recommendation that I could make is that you clearly specify that the last scene was at the hospital first of all, because I was thinking it was at the office, ie the officer was giving the rundown to the office manager at the scene. I didn't realize where that was taking place until Ed spoke and the hospital was definitely mentioned at that point.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 19 May 2012 09:29:44 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Poets Anxiety</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/poets-anxiety-a-poem-by-teresa-nash.html#comment-4933</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Thanks Van ;) It happens all the time!!! I wrote this awesome piece about something and somewhat somehow but it never made it on paper ;) Know I can't remember even what it was about lol!!!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 00:02:43 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Done</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/done-a-poem-by-chris-starks.html#comment-4932</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Thanks for the poem&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 15 May 2012 21:52:30 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Dear Topher,</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Prose/dear-topher.html#comment-4931</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;This was written with sincerity and not out of anger... heartache doesn't change just because time grows between the instant it happens and where we are now... I know that I wasn't the only one heartbroken, but I only have one side of the story... you never had the chance to tell me yours... for that I am sorry.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 15 May 2012 21:50:58 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Followers</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Prose/followers-prose-by-brandon-bell.html#comment-4930</link>
			<description><![CDATA[w.brandon.bell@gmail.com says: &quot;Didn't know the story went up so quickly -- thanks for all the kind words and keep up the good work.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>w.brandon.bell@gmail.com</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 11 May 2012 06:34:15 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Yellowstone the Heart</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/yellowstone-the-heart-a-poem-by-dan-van-fleet.html#comment-4929</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Beautiful :)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 09 May 2012 03:55:18 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Poets Anxiety</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/poets-anxiety-a-poem-by-teresa-nash.html#comment-4928</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;I L.O.V.E. this. It may be the same for many of us. our very best work is given only to ourself and forgotten before we can return and write it down. It happened this morning while driving. How about yours.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 08 May 2012 15:11:35 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Untitled</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/untitled-that-year-a-poem-by-alex-damov.html#comment-4927</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;A blade-a bath -and a bottle of Wodka- I feel like dancing in the dark on the banks of Kamchatka. I never tire of your strange desire.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 03 May 2012 21:16:28 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>There!</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/there-a-poem-by-alex-damov.html#comment-4926</link>
			<description><![CDATA[quidquid says: &quot;Thanky. I actually had a better idea for this line something along the lines of - 'with one hand he held her, with the other a knife, grinning into black bark of the night sky' etc. but then i'm too lazy, so i just shoved it in here and out of my head. Thanks for noticing though.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>quidquid</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 03 May 2012 12:54:24 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>I know you are going to read this</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/i-know-you-are-going-to-read-this-a-poem-by-teresa-nash.html#comment-4925</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;The ghost of love so present here- a beautiful hurt. Thank You&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 02 May 2012 23:16:07 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>There!</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/there-a-poem-by-alex-damov.html#comment-4924</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Your words could never be mistaken for another, a chalet located next door to Salvador Dali. "While skies yet dark into its bark I carved....How can you not love this line? This line shall weather!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 01 May 2012 19:16:56 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>You Ruined Paris</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/you-ruined-paris-by-daniel-van-fleet.html#comment-4923</link>
			<description><![CDATA[quidquid says: &quot;Listen closely to Niagara Falls it pours out your name - much liked that line&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>quidquid</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 28 Apr 2012 14:47:28 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Ode to Nick Drake</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/ode-to-nick-drake-a-poem-by-soi-distant.html#comment-4922</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;Being a lone wolf is a difficult existence. "they can love but, tear out the soul from all our loins" is a great line that I think could be really developed. But I like it as it stands.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 27 Apr 2012 09:41:07 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>You Ruined Paris</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/you-ruined-paris-by-daniel-van-fleet.html#comment-4921</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I bet your wife is the bomb! You speak of her so lovingly, and it shows in all your romantic pieces but this is awesome ;) Lucky her to be written poetry ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2012 01:12:17 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>H N Friends</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/h-n-friends.html#comment-4920</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Very heavy my friend... you captured the cage that becomes life, while snorting those spikes, the shame that's insane, while smacking those veins... well done :)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2012 01:08:17 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Ode to Nick Drake</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/ode-to-nick-drake-a-poem-by-soi-distant.html#comment-4919</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Where should I stay? Because I have nowhere to roam. Awesomeness.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2012 01:03:38 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>its all over at 11</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/its-all-over-at-11-a-poem-by-soi-distant.html#comment-4918</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I absolutely love this one!!!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2012 01:01:39 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>trusty datsun</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/trusty-datsun-a-poem-by-soi-distant.html#comment-4917</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I too enjoyed this piece... makes me want to be the man with the trusty datsun...&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2012 01:00:38 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Route 66 and Flies</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/route-66-and-flies-a-poem-by-dan-van-fleet.html#comment-4916</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;The death of Route 66 and all the life that sprang from the asphalt, the lives that now border it with white crosses... seems sad, but in a sense necessary. I'm not sure why? Maybe to be forgotten, so that history's past may one day be found, and truly missed... lovely poem :)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2012 00:58:11 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>What toothpaste do you use?</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/what-toothpaste-do-you-use-a-poem-by-lepetitepois.html#comment-4915</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I like this very much :)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2012 00:53:19 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Fat</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/fat-a-poem-by-teresa-nash.html#comment-4914</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;It makes me wonder what the real issue is... what fear takes control so that we waste away our health... what laziness controls us to the point of not caring... anxiety? depression? addiction? does any of it even matter anyways? because once we do realize, and it's inevitable that we do realize, that we are affecting ourselves so negatively, what the hell has the power to change any of it? idk&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2012 00:50:55 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>A short walk to parenthood</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Prose/a-short-walk-to-parenthood-prose-by-dan-van-fleet.html#comment-4913</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I really like this ;) If only we could keep those moments of gratitude and wonder longer somehow... You've been on quite a roll lately friend :) I've enjoyed a ton of your work but have been to frazzled lately to speak my thoughts... my apologies...&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2012 00:45:37 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Fat</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/fat-a-poem-by-teresa-nash.html#comment-4912</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Disgusting us un third world countries hey. So true these observation, we would trade anything to be skinny (except for the food that makes us FAT, and dats dat.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 25 Apr 2012 16:18:31 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Route 66 and Flies</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/route-66-and-flies-a-poem-by-dan-van-fleet.html#comment-4911</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;A nice ode to route 66. There are preservation efforts underway but it's not a living thing anymore.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sun, 22 Apr 2012 17:35:24 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>DEPRESSION</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/depression-a-poem-by-beverley-gibson.html#comment-4910</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;I think that your poem encapsulates many people's struggles with depression. It was straightforward and "unadorned" but good in its ability to convey the thoughts.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 17 Apr 2012 17:24:06 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>trusty datsun</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/trusty-datsun-a-poem-by-soi-distant.html#comment-4909</link>
			<description><![CDATA[quidquid says: &quot;Good Job. - all i have left of myself is a tan, my gun and my cherry red datsun - Very picturesque&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>quidquid</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 14 Apr 2012 09:08:38 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>H N Friends</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/h-n-friends.html#comment-4908</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;I think it was effective. I didn't know that it was Heroin... so know it really comes together. Great work!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 11 Apr 2012 08:46:05 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>H N Friends</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/h-n-friends.html#comment-4907</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Herion and friends, (Crack etc) the spike, the armored vien, a symbolizism that kills the soul all the same. Thank You Joshua, I wanted to have the reader feel the disgust of ones own life lost on a one way road.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 11 Apr 2012 08:18:26 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>H N Friends</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/h-n-friends.html#comment-4906</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;I like the symbolism of this poem. Some of it was very powerful and imaginative.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 10 Apr 2012 20:52:03 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Battle Scars</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/battle-scars-a-poem-by-teresa-nash-buchanan-the-bomb.html#comment-4905</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;Very heartfelt poem that flowed along nicely. This reminds me of the long poems of old that were a form of polished prose. But the themes that you touch are well said.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 07 Apr 2012 09:43:33 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Beau-Ideal Romance</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/a-poem-by-emanuel-charlot.html#comment-4904</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Entities of Hot Words mixed up with emotions, create oceans of love, As I loved your poem. I especially like the love and angle verse.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 05 Apr 2012 21:01:56 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Beau-Ideal Romance</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/a-poem-by-emanuel-charlot.html#comment-4903</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;This a well-done love poem. It's very difficult to express the strength of love and its attendant emotions without seeming maudlin and gushing. But I think you straddled the fence nicely.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 04 Apr 2012 13:36:07 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>untitled</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/untitled-a-poem-by-alex-damov.html#comment-4902</link>
			<description><![CDATA[quidquid says: &quot;yeah, hi there and thank you. trying to figure the thing out&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>quidquid</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 30 Mar 2012 20:16:52 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>untitled</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/untitled-a-poem-by-alex-damov.html#comment-4901</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Brandon Hennen says: &quot;almost works better as an aphorism. true, nevertheless.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Brandon Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 30 Mar 2012 18:52:22 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>And this bird you cannot change</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/and-this-bird-you-cannot-change-a-poem-by-teresa-nash.html#comment-4900</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Haha! It ain't so! Just more @ peace than I have been in quite a while ;) Enjoying the minutes while they last, instead of when they've passed ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 30 Mar 2012 01:12:07 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>untitled</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/untitled-a-poem-by-alex-damov.html#comment-4899</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Quid quid is it really you? I love the take on your persecution free zone-but just in case, marvelous.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 29 Mar 2012 17:05:41 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>And this bird you cannot change</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Gadzooks! Is this really you or just floating thoughts, a free and easy wicked, say it ain't so- Bird calls through the jalousies and Building my nest out of what I can gather- Love these line. Way to go my smooth and easy going islander.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 29 Mar 2012 17:01:03 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>As the city burns</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/as-the-city-burns-a-poem-by-raven.html#comment-4897</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Raven says: &quot;Again, you are so kind to me and my writing, I appreciate all of your comments and sentiments reading through, it's my turn to take some time and read more of yours :)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Raven</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 28 Mar 2012 15:38:40 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>As the city burns</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/as-the-city-burns-a-poem-by-raven.html#comment-4896</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;You never disappoint, There's a richness to the way you deliver a message. I hope for the sake of so many young writers, they get a chance to read and experience this feeling I get when read your work. I love the way you heat your words up before releasing them in the sky above our heads. Thanks Raven-I feel much better now. I can't choose which one I like best, maybe this one.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 28 Mar 2012 08:48:00 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>BLACKLONDONBIRD</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/blacklondonbird-a-poem-by-dani-van-fleet.html#comment-4895</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;I have always loved your "Unique" style of writing and hoped to read more. Your last two poems were incredible and I thought to myself, what the hey, lets see if we can get this Raven to sing us one more song.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 27 Mar 2012 09:06:58 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>BLACKLONDONBIRD</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/blacklondonbird-a-poem-by-dani-van-fleet.html#comment-4894</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Raven says: &quot;... wow :) .. you shot me down with this one, R&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Raven</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 27 Mar 2012 02:16:56 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>A POEM FOR HIP HOP</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/a-poem-for-hip-hop-a-poem-by-g-spells.html#comment-4893</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I must say I am of the same generation, my husband looks at me sideways when I bump xscape and just chill ;) lol Nice tribute :)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2012 21:36:01 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Who Played That Drum Note</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/who-played-that-drum-note-a-poem-by-g-spells.html#comment-4892</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;This gives me chickenskin ;) Love it!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2012 21:30:04 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>The Blues Beneath Beverly</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/the-blues-beneath-beverly-a-poem-by-g-spells.html#comment-4891</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I hate to assume... but this was written with "our" Beverly in mind correct? It's a masterpiece Spells ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2012 21:28:53 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Champagne Nights</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/champagne-nights-a-poem-by-g-spells.html#comment-4890</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Love this one too - Mr. Romance&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2012 18:25:52 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>The Blues Beneath Beverly</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;A Beautiful Blue color poem- nicely painted Spells, it belongs in the Gallery&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2012 18:24:36 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>I Love Apples</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/i-love-apples-a-poem-by-dani-van-fleet.html#comment-4888</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Raven thank God your still here. I just posted Blacklondonbird in hopes to here another of your incredible poems. I've always loved your writing and lately have not seen any. I hope you will be posting soon.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2012 17:21:19 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>I Love Apples</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Raven says: &quot;Poems dedicated to love are never short of wisdom :)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Raven</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2012 03:17:23 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Dark Haiku</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Raven says: &quot;Hey, I am happy to say after reading this beautiful piece, you have given some light to my mind :) thank you!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Raven</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2012 03:14:03 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Followers</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Brandon Hennen says: &quot;this is a perfectly realized little package. economical. emotionally gripping. Please, for the sake of literature, keep posting!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Brandon Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 24 Mar 2012 00:40:19 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>I Love Apples</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Love it! When I first read it I must admit, I thought this is a little dirty ;) My favorite line - There will be no wine... or you look fine - Awesome poem Vman ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 23:55:25 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>I Love Apples</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Wicked did you catch the play on this poem, I love Apples refers to Computers, the 3 D love...pornos, the mouse to clean and tap?&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 20:04:57 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Followers</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Prose/followers-prose-by-brandon-bell.html#comment-4882</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I want to know what happened!!! lol More please?&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 02:29:57 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Dust Devils</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I must agree my dear Vangoman! You've got skillz that could bring forth the supernatural ;) I know you are a true romantic, and it would be interesting to see how that could bring to life a story or cast... Ink heroin for sure ;) Thx&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 02:29:04 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Baggage Carrier</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I forgot how much I loved this poem ;) I can't believe I didn't comment on it before now... Thx ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 02:25:36 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>SEARCHING</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/searching-a-poem-by-beverly-gibson.html#comment-4879</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Definitely drenched in emotion... I think we have all felt like this at some point in time... very relatable.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 02:23:24 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Dust Devils</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Prose/dust-devils-prose-by-dani-van-fleet.html#comment-4878</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Thanks Joshua, I think I'll give the fantasy fiction a try. It seems as these romantic words just keep stumbling out of me, but it may be time to try something new, maybe get back to something like the hydoponic pants and Jerry Garcia T-shirt story.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 22 Mar 2012 17:18:12 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Dust Devils</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Prose/dust-devils-prose-by-dani-van-fleet.html#comment-4877</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;I love it! You could do so some great sci-fi or fantasy fiction. But at the end of it all, we're just hopeless romantics that read and write this stuff, stumbling from heartbreak to heartbreak and astonished every time it happens. Your visuals were perfect.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 21 Mar 2012 19:33:13 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Trimester One</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Tsnclr says: &quot;Thank you Sunchild!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Tsnclr</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 19 Mar 2012 07:56:36 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Followers</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Prose/followers-prose-by-brandon-bell.html#comment-4875</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;Great storytelling! Your writing style is very quick but you linger long enough to allow the reader to see through the character's eyes. You also include just enough seemingly random details and stray thoughts to make it all believable. Bravo!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sun, 18 Mar 2012 10:33:35 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Vikings' Topaz</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/vikings-topaz-a-poem-by-jordan-redshaw.html#comment-4874</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;You did a great job with this poem. It is usually very difficult to rhyme while not seeming ancient and airy or even worse... hokie! But that wasn't the case at all with this poem. The only potential bugaboo that I noticed was the slight contortion of "raw red" in order to make the rhyme. But that could just be stylistic of me.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 14 Mar 2012 08:19:41 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>What Time is This, and What Place?</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[NATURAL says: &quot;Made me think ..Very Good&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>NATURAL</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 11:47:16 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Trimester One</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Sunchild says: &quot;This line made it for me i must say: Bones are to be drained of minerals like mice gnawing in winter&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Sunchild</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 12 Mar 2012 18:58:17 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>What Time is This, and What Place?</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Ericura says: &quot;Thank you so much wickedwahine_69 . This is my first post, so your support means a lot :)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Ericura</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 12 Mar 2012 17:00:12 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>What Time is This, and What Place?</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I love this!!! Thx ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 12 Mar 2012 16:29:03 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>True Reflection</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/true-reflection-a-poem-by-beverly-gibson.html#comment-4869</link>
			<description><![CDATA[NATURAL says: &quot;Thank you for your comment wickedwahine_69 ..appreciated..&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>NATURAL</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 12 Mar 2012 04:54:35 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>the man without a shadow</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I agree with VangoMan, I was left with images sadness, but in a sort of deep, good way ;) Awesome work!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 12 Mar 2012 01:22:05 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>True Reflection</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/true-reflection-a-poem-by-beverly-gibson.html#comment-4867</link>
			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I truly enjoyed this piece. Thx ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 12 Mar 2012 01:12:56 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>the man without a shadow</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/the-man-without-a-shadow-a-poem-by-jodie-clarke.html#comment-4866</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;There's a soft velvet feeling with rich deep undertones to this work, and I Luv, Luv, Luv it. Thank You for sharing this with all of us. It's beautiful.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sun, 11 Mar 2012 08:11:27 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Lever up the Sky</title>
			<link>http://www.hennensobserver.com/Poetry/lever-up-the-sky-a-poem-by-dan-van-fleet.html#comment-4865</link>
			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;The ink you spill on me tatoo's me with such honor. Thank you ladies for your soft and kind words.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 09 Mar 2012 19:22:06 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Lever up the Sky</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Ericura says: &quot;WOW! I was mesmerized. Really flowing - both in words and in a logical pattern of thought progression. An emotional journey from transcendence to sadness, but exuding nobility throughout.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Ericura</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 09 Mar 2012 10:30:04 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Beach</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Because that's exactly how I felt on the beach, laying in the sun roasting but being rained on with ice cold drops that seemed to come from nowhere... it felt almost orgasmic ;) That and it put me in mind of minty gum... that super hot with the icy cold. Dirty mouth clean it up! lol&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 08 Mar 2012 00:02:46 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Beach</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;Why did you choose the image of minty gum? It works but I wonder why....&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 07 Mar 2012 11:41:31 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Gin, Tonic and Lime </title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;In that case, just chill on the first few and then do what you will on the rest!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 14:58:06 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Beach</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Thanks... it was a trip suntanning in the rain!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 00:47:39 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Lever up the Sky</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I like this very much ;) It has an awesome flow to it and so many questions float through my mind while reading it :) Thanks!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 00:46:02 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Gin, Tonic and Lime </title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;If I could drink a Gin and Tonic, without ten more to go with it, I would love to read this while chilling my doubts ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 00:43:55 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Dear ?</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;The emotions of this poem are very real and powerful. Everyone has been in the situation that you describe, I think,&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2012 15:40:51 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Beach</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;Short but effective... you definitely covey the sense of contrasts.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2012 15:38:23 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>The show must go on.</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;I agree with Vangoman. Solid work.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 29 Feb 2012 18:36:00 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>The show must go on.</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;Thanks Van ;) Everything around me seems to be changing... rapidly and without breath for explanation...&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Wed, 29 Feb 2012 03:05:42 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>The show must go on.</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;So dark and ending like a dead end. The opening two line sets the stage of a real coming cold death, but the two lines "rupturing the seam of the present, extending history as a replacement...fuck me wildly, what two incredible lines. I melt into rubble just contenplating this. GREAT WORK.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 28 Feb 2012 21:02:10 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>The woman who never spoke</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[grunfruaorshell says: &quot;While reading this part of me wanted it to be smoother or less rushed , for lack of a better word. I was hoping for more cohesion and depth. And then I got to the end and realized, no. That would not have worked here. The flow and the style, whether intentional or not, are indicative to Richard's self absorption and need for instant gratification. Well done and I thoroughly enjoyed the ending.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>grunfruaorshell</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 28 Feb 2012 00:58:35 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Clearance Sale</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[grunfruaorshell says: &quot;Thank you Van. This was actually inspired by a conversation with another artist. She felt she was getting left behind because she wasn't completely addicted to texting and tweeting...I want to work on it some more and tweak it a bit. It still needs something.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>grunfruaorshell</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Tue, 28 Feb 2012 00:39:06 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Clearance Sale</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Aileen says: &quot;Interesting but questionable, Sad, this happens when you wait for Crumbs.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Aileen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 27 Feb 2012 08:10:16 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>metropolitan</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[anodyneargot says: &quot;thanks kindly for all comments...hope you will read my other poem twitch too it was about last year's change from year of tiger to year of rabbit..&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>anodyneargot</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sun, 26 Feb 2012 22:34:02 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Clearance Sale</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;And so an older sun runs for cover from the loud noises of a new silence. I feel and understand this as the art of us is dying. Great insight, but oh so very sad the future.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 25 Feb 2012 19:16:04 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Envy for Robert</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;Well I think Frost would be proud of this tribute poem. Very good.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 25 Feb 2012 10:50:34 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>metropolitan</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;Excellent work. Each word is like a jewel. I can read many metaphors into this poem. I take the jewel in the ring to be emblematic of the early promise of relationships to only be tarnished. Of course... we then mold to a new setting, don't we? Anyway, superb!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 25 Feb 2012 10:49:02 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Envy for Robert</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Thank You; I always loved the way Robert Frost Poetry was simple and about those things most important to him at his farm. I though it would be a good thing to remember him with a poem.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 20 Feb 2012 17:23:58 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>metropolitan</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;Exquisite; your words dance with delight against the dark city night. I love the way you put this precious jewel in context. Once brilliant and clean when anew, and how it eventually gets tarnished. And isn't it us who dulls her shine?. Thanks for this poem, I loved it!!!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 20 Feb 2012 09:49:44 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Envy for Robert</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[lilroba1 says: &quot;i like it&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>lilroba1</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Mon, 20 Feb 2012 00:22:30 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Pretty to sin</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[gatheredsouls13 says: &quot;okay thank you for your opinion and honesty&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>gatheredsouls13</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 18 Feb 2012 18:33:12 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Pretty to sin</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;It seems that the formatting may have been messed up on this, I don't know. But this reads like poetry in the form of prose. Try this as an exercise: write one paragraph describing a scene. This will develop your descriptive powers. And just because its short doesn't mean it can't be a complete story. Sometimes you can let the reader devise their own plots by titillating them. See Ernest Hemingway's complete story, "For sale: baby shoes, never worn."&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 18 Feb 2012 09:46:50 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>When I am On Display</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Joshua Hennen says: &quot;Very good poem. It was a naked display of emotions for sure.&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Joshua Hennen</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Sat, 18 Feb 2012 09:18:20 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>The Russian's Garden</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I really like this :) Thx&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 17 Feb 2012 06:17:18 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>When I am On Display</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;This is flippin' AWESOME!!! You totally through me for a loop with Choice being an actual entity... this ones going on the fridge ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 17 Feb 2012 06:13:18 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Iron Wood</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;I'm a poet did you know it? :) Love it!&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 17 Feb 2012 06:09:26 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>Alliance</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[wickedwahine_69 says: &quot;This piece really makes me think... what the meaning is? Everything from hot days to whiny people, from god to fate cross my mind when I read this one... Thx ;)&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>wickedwahine_69</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Fri, 17 Feb 2012 06:07:27 --500</pubDate>
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			<title>I Saw the Ugliest Sight (and it was me)</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Vangoman says: &quot;I love this; you threw a blanket over the vast intoxicating intricacy of human frailty. The che of our personal dismemberments. Love, hate, happy, sad, disdain and of course forgivness, that flower in our thorny garden. I especially love your willingness to expose yourself, a true measure of one's ability to let go. "A Poet"&quot;]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Vangoman</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 16 Feb 2012 09:04:08 --500</pubDate>
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