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Om Nama Shiva

Friday, February 18 2011 00:25 Published & Contest Winning Poems
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"Runner-up in the Open Community Poetry Contest for the period January-March, 2011"-ed.

 

Missing piece

Link into me

Let me be not missing.

Not so blind.

Clean.

Falling into freedom

Filling in the void.

Stop.

Truth in words.

Listen.

Caress my vulnerable spots gently.

Feel fill flit flounder fly flake

Forgive.

Let the problems of the world

Not rest on my shoulders.

Point to a path of solution,

Instead.

Give me joy,

In my crookedness.

My lopsided self.

Allow me to enjoy love freely.

To not hold back.

And to stand strong!

Even if I stumble.

Attract the sun to my foundation,

So that I am warm and solid,

To the touch.

Keep me on the ground,

But teach me how to dance.

Om Nama Shiva,

I surrender to the God within myself.

 

Comments  

 
#1 Joshua Hennen 2011-02-19 00:09
Excellent poem, this is the best of yours that I've seen. You have progressed tremendously.
 
 
#2 Raven 2011-02-19 00:15
Wonderfully expressive, and I really love the theme, so different :)"R"
 
 
#3 Vangoman 2011-02-19 00:32
Eat live and love, who could ask for more, it is when we are most true to ourselves that the true essence of being dwells in us, and in tis work you found what you have been searching to say to #1. (none should be so blind) Congrads.
 
 
#4 wickedwahine_69 2011-02-19 10:19
Thanks for your comments ;) I enjoyed writing this as a sort of morning meditation. Prayers that my heart seem to whisper... when I am trying to be silent ;)
 
 
#5 Joshua Hennen 2011-03-07 13:06
This is still your best piece. When I think of wickedwahine 69, I think of "Om Nama Shiva" ... and "God has no Religion" of course.
 
 
#6 wickedwahine_69 2011-03-07 23:11
Still glad you like it ;) It's probably my most positive piece... which says quite a bit since I seem to be more aquainted with the dark side ;) lol Thx again!
 
 
#7 a 2011-03-08 07:09
You have developed wicked, and it is a pleaure to see that development. Thanks for letting us share in it.